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Lust

I detest you..
I want you
Like a breath that is haggard ...hushed.

I'll Make you
...And break you..
A malignant, stagnant rush..

I taste you
...and spit you
poison is this crush

I watch you
...and stalk you
Lust fuels a virgin's blush

What lies behind those liquid pools
Hued of the finest brandy...

Creamed decadence flows past my lips
your taste...bittersweet candy..

Come coil your darkness ,around my thighs
Unfurl wicked delights upon me..

Beckon the nectar from my wounds..
A Tourniquet....cut free...

I crave you
I torture you
With velvet words and lies

I'll tempt you
I'll Keep you
Mock your pitious cries..

I tease you
and slice you
to a shredded pile

I'll damn you
and free you
my beauty ,dark and vile

I hide you
and force you
fully in the light

I'll wake you
and ride you
a dozen darkened nights

I love you
I taunt you
Keeping you at bay..

I rule you
Mold you...
You'd have it no other way...

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On Thursday September 1st, 2005, abattoir (143) writes:

what a spitfire vixen. you come across the face with a back-hand. and you were right I loved it.

On Tuesday June 14th, 2005, etarnally damnd (99) writes:

great write.-michael

On Friday January 7th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

amazing

On Thursday January 6th, 2005, blue (1702) writes:

*smiles* ...that was really great!! *more smiles* ~b

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

You are without a doubt one of the most talented poets on this site. Your work is like a drink of the devils blood, so sinful yet you want more.

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Mischevious Princess (53) writes:

very very very nice write hon....I like it.....

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Neith (29) writes:

Beautiful poem, extremely well written...it leave's me wanting more :) ~shy vampire

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

o.0 i love it ~slave

On Thursday April 1st, 2004, DarkNTormented (17) writes:

i love it very very well put

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

I hate this poem for what it symbolizes to me. I love this poem for the work of art that it is. You have great talent.

On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

All my feelings I can sum up in one word, BEAUTIFUL!

On Sunday February 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

i like this piece very much, you seem to have influence over people when you write...myself included

On Friday January 23rd, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

wow wow wow wow. Pure erotica, empowering...no doubt you've had many at your mercy. I say again...wow. FF

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, purr_verse (1423) writes:

good gods, what is there left to say?! i'm a latecomer to this little beauty, and i'll just say that i agree with everyone who thought this dripped passion infernal, divine... purr

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"With velvet words and lies " this poem not only brings outh the lust in me, it hungers me... my legs shiver & shake, my hand finds a place to imagine...

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

i feel the music of Enigma/Manson in this poem; dirrty, eroctic, haunting, trance, soulful, hard, gothic, sexual... pure unadulterated lust!

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"Quit staring at my tits!!" I can't! Their gorgeous; velvet red, with that whip, making me wish it were something else... damn! Pure lust...

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I love this.. not much more to say, except it's great, love the flow..

On Saturday November 8th, 2003, SGT Bloth (191) writes:

WoW!! Darling.... Not only do you have a velvet tongue, but also a velvet mind.....Good Write i loved it....Bloth AnDii :*

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (39) writes:

Whoa. I need to find a woman like this. Nice one.

On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:

I really liked this one. Lustful and still seems like just a toy you play with

On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:

and yet there seems to be more than just flesh....nah...I am probably all wrong

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

i like it...reminds me of an exgirlfriend

On Thursday September 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

very cool, man. paints a pretty picture of gettin funky. well worded and very intelligent.

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, Dedkandanc (17) writes:

Very well written! You definately express the mad power of Lust!~Ded

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

I'd add it to my favorites list if I knew how, this is fucking mind boggling. You make me sad because i know I will never ooze genius the way this poem does.

On Sunday September 14th, 2003, TheMistressBucket (19) writes:

This is fantastic! Soooo SEXY! Nice work. :)

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Crimson Lady (34) writes:

I had to read it 4 times, I couldnt stop at 1. Its sexy and will get anyone going. I loved it. CL.

On Monday August 18th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:

I am going to just jump into this crown of lust fanatics and say...that was beautiful...here, have a rose---(>

On Sunday August 17th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:

I have to go change my panties now.

On Sunday August 17th, 2003, Drea (917) writes:

i loved it. i love all your work. very good read.. nice use of words. ~Drea~

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

Oh man. So juicy. I love it... especially the dark coil part.

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:

hhhhmmmmmm well written. i really like this,...*leaves to read more* .::ChéRie::.

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

Wooh! This is one of your best pieces...a ride i'll never forget

On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

eloquent... the rhythm, the rhyme, they fit the piece perfectly... lust... the words put visions in my head and heat in my heart... well written.

On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

Reading This Reminds Me Of A Tug-Of-War Scenario... But Oozes Sexuality And Dominance. Me Like. GPhD.

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

mmmm who ended up in the mud after that game? heh

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

It Was Me... With My White Underwear... THRILLING!

On Friday July 25th, 2003, Liz (401) writes:

makes me feel dirty, sexy, and strong. a very solid, confident piece.

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Can't say anything they havent already said really. But I loved it. It felt like... cream. It felt like cream. Soft, flowing, but it had substance. I like. #flower#

On Friday July 18th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

Thank you very much, for your comments..

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

This flows beautifully. Me like

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, hate_doll (327) writes:

LOOK! it's letting me comment!! and I LOVE this piece...so dark, sadistic, loverly. Just like yourself ;) keep writing, darling, you truly have talent...

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Thank you, the piece reminds me of times past. It truly inspires the word.

On Monday July 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

good, no great, fluent, variant...hmmm don't know what to say, tempting, sounds true... I just like it, it fits. keep it going!!

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

NOOOO I am in control! Sexy poem!

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:

I have a bit of a hard time commenting on your work. So I'm just going to say I like this one. ~DW~

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

great write...it does seem instinctive in a way, but very smooth and satisfying...wonderful ~saint~

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, Deeter (30) writes:

it seems almost instinctive, very thoughtful, I like =)

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

it was instinctive, I wote it in about 4 minutes, the words just flowed, but alot of my work is like that, I call it prattle, Im glad you enjoyed it!

On Friday July 4th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

very nice... keep writng

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Can't wait to read more of you, welcome to DP. ~ Walk in Harmony ~ mw

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:

Good write. the flow is great and your taunting left me wanting more...

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