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As he looked at her
with a gaze of surprise
and an expression
of stress released
she fumbled with the
English language
her first tongue
but she couldn't
work it right
so she just smiled

he started to stand up
mumbled something
about not wishing to
wear out his welcome
and she wondered
if he came just to come
or if he came for love

she cornered him
in the doorway
and she said

"I've breathed the air
that came from your lungs
I've tasted your tongue
between my lips
I've heard your voice
breathless by my ear
and felt your
exploring fingertips
but I want more"
she said
"oh so much more"
she said

he said
"I don't know
what this is
I can't give
more than this
right now
maybe
someday"
he said
"maybe someday"
he said

so they looked
at each other
she wondered
if she should say
anything else
and he didn't make
any move
so she kissed him
and opened the door
so he could leave

he told her
he'd be in touch
and she
waved good-bye
then tried to find
her senses
she returned
to that place
where they'd
been laying
moments before
pillows still warm
and she curled up
and said

"this is enough for now
but I'll want more"
she said
"maybe someday"
she said

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On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
very nice poem and so real. I guess we have all been there, wanting more.


On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, ashottothetemple (73) writes:
The perfect story of how it really works!


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:
this is PERFECTION!!! so very well written.


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Six-Out (1823) writes:
Don't I know this all too well. The longing-wanting and constantly almost...needing more. The ending left me feeling hopeful, but also sunken a little. Maybe I just relate a little too well.


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, Bast (896) writes:
make this a song, please. :) i think it has just the right rhythm to be a beautiful song. aaaah, that delightful awkwardness of wanting more and not being sure if now is the right time. mm. :)


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, Nightingale (555) writes:
Luv said the same thing - about making it a song. He's getting me some music production software... I'm going to Bjork it up. :-D


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Jonas (867) writes:
longing. a feeling i know well right now. ...i'm attempting not to be too cynical about my own feelings, so i do not believe i can leave a comment that is not caustic to the situation described, in honesty, beautiful in its illustration of patience in lov


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, DeprivedOfReason (42) writes:
mmm .. i'm bound to create an array of compliments on all your works i can see it now, but for starters the dialogue was captivating in this and the imagery a portrait skillfully painted in the art of pining.. Could definately relate ..


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, DeprivedOfReason (42) writes:
though i might have just thrown him down and had my way with him before he walked through that door I likeeed a lot ;)


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Linwe (29) writes:
Weeh, this is so cool!! Desire in beautiful words... and in a funny way! If you talk to your boyfriend like this, I bet he's just one lucky guy! ;) Nicely written



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