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I called you from a payphone
so your caller ID wouldn't know it was me
I hoped that you wouldn't be home
so I could leave a message after the beep
I dialed three digits
paused, then hung up
practiced what I'd say after the tone
but when all seven were dialed
two rings then "hello?"
my breath caught - I couldn't make a sound
no matter how many times
I see your face in the pictures
or hear your voice in recordings
from the music you make
I can't stop my heart from pounding
when I catch you real-time
and I lose all sense
of what to say
I try to think quick
but I've lost all my wit
and my moves become clumsy and numb
butterflies in my stomach
frog in my throat
ultimately, I've been struck dumb

damn you



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On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Only someone as talented as you could serenade me with a piece regarding a seemingly simple event. You are truly a nightengale. ~Faerie~


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
space of what 10 secs?In some respects though its an exciting feeling...someones made you feel all tingly and nervous lol!This made me smile because I miss that feeling.Aw.


On Monday August 2nd, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
Aaaah Ive been there...When THAT person is walking towards you and you think 'Ah fuck please ground swallow me...No thats not gonna happen,Ok do I say hello or not?I'll say hello...what if they dont say hello back...' etc and this is all thought in a spac


On Friday July 23rd, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
great work, i liked the last line,summed the feelings up so well


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
lol. ive felt this way. good job. A_C


On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, batman nipples (2241) writes:
Oh, how tragic. Don't we all know how this goes? Lovely, Miss Nightingale.


On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
well written peice, ended well :) *runs off to peruse more of your work*



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