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A stray stand of hair caught between my fingers
purple and black, coarse from dye
a second trapped in time yet gone too soon
she left on a plane, traveled thousands of miles away
slipping through like sand in an hourglass
I lost her, I found her, I lose her again
time passes far too fast and in these fleeting moments
there's never enough time for me to worship her
hands clasp in prayer devoted to her
and many wonder why I'd spend my time like this
devoting such attentions to a woman such as she
who some may consider wasted and worn
but such an energy radiates from her resilient spirit
in her flawed human shell I find divine perfection

#69

(I don't think I'm that good at dedications & it hardly does her justice, but I wanted to do something...)



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On Thursday February 3rd, 2005, Vindicated_untouchable (23) writes:
I agree with the name thing. Great write. ~Kittie~


On Friday January 28th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:
prefection I must say and she has a lovley name.... ~*Kitty*~


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
I think this is a wonderful dedication...such lovely imagery with the hair in the beginning. The devastation of fleeting moments is beuatifully expressed. Fox


On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (910) writes:
There's something ethereal and timeless about this poem... well-done. I think the first two lines are weaker than the rest, though - they don't quite seem to fit.


On Friday January 30th, 2004, Jonas (866) writes:
they do fit...


On Friday January 16th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (712) writes:
You know I love Kitty, but since you comment whored, this is all you get!!!! Bleh!


On Friday January 16th, 2004, Nightingale (555) writes:
:-P Better than nothing.


On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Bast (899) writes:
::blush:: thankee.... i love it... it made me all teary eyed and glowy inside.


On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Nightingale (555) writes:
Best I could do.


On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
At least you have those "fleeting moments". There are those of us who feel the same way but will never know her like you do. Great dedication, though :)


On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Nightingale (555) writes:
*grins* Yeah, I'm lucky enough to have known her for 10 years.


On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Nightingale (555) writes:
(I added alterate lines in the beginning at a later time... I know it makes it jolty but there's something within that I like anyway.)



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