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...I dance in the pouring rain...
because there I can cry
and my tears are disguised
as those of the sky's

#60


Copyright 2003 Nightingale

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On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (108) writes:
short and sweet just like the oompaloompa that fell in the chocolate river.This has a simple profoundness to it though. any more words and it would be saying more then is needed. great write.


On Sunday July 4th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
adorable.. drew me right in...


On Monday February 16th, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:
in few words a feeling that is eternal is captured... it would be presumptuous(sp?) to be more long winded than the work to describe how i feel... oops, i did.


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Exodus (210) writes:
Its beautiful...I love it alot...


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Ah thankee.


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
ooh i love it


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
I hated it when I first posted it. Too short. But it's growing on me...


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
Damn tree huggin hippies.


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Yeah, sitting here in my hemp clothing, holding my peace sign, with my long hair and believing in all that free love and drugs stuff... got an issue with that?


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
And what if I do?


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Why?


On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
Because I'm me and I want your sex!


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Loserland (134) writes:
good symbolism


On Monday October 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Thankee.


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:
Yea that is a certain winner on this Tiger. *saluting the birdie* Btw. I love tree lovers. Tiger


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
*grins* Do I make your favourites list yet?



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