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I'm sitting by the kitchen window eating
A warm brownie that my mother's made for me
My breath fogs up the glass and I
Use my hand to wipe it away to see.
I peer out into the storm,
I see the rain, it coming in sheets
Then slows down to a gentle drizzle
While it floods the streets
I trace the path of the flow
As I watch from my window
It's calming and gentle
So beautiful
The black of the pavement
Made shining by rain it's
Like a scene from a movie.
It's beautiful.
I wish I could get my camera
Take a picture of this scene
But it never comes out through the glass...
I consider walking outside into the rain
To take a picture that would contain
The feeling of the wetness of the rain.
But I don't have the want to rise from my seat
To put on my coat and set my camera
To take this picture perfect-scene,
Instead, I race outside without the camera or a coat,
And run around in the rain until my clothing's soaked.

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On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, fuck you (30) writes:
As the clouds release torrents of a universal solvent, the world appears to be dissolving beyond the window. The tress seem to melt as readily as green crayons...


On Saturday September 27th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Why waste time. Just have fun. Indeed the rain is wonderful. Cleanses the body and soul and the mind...


On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Hell yeah.


On Saturday September 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1106) writes:
"Like a scene from a movie" your poem illustrates a deeper feel than any photograph... thou I'd like to see the image captured, superimposed over this piece of work, as seen from your eyes.


On Saturday September 6th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Aye. Pictures tell a thousand words, but sometimes a few words will tell a picture.


On Friday August 29th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
excellent. im speechless, i got lost in the rain. beautiful. XbrollyX


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Got lost? Go towards the light! *grins*


On Monday August 25th, 2003, worm (131) writes:
I used to think about going outside in the rain... but it all just seems to be pointless now... thanks for allowing me to tag along with your thoughts!... worm


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
You're quite welcome. Thank you for your kind comments.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Six-Out (1820) writes:
Heh, damn kids.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
*grins*


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Yes,i hate it when i miss out on those kodak moments...-Kefka


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
lol... well, it's a memory now, instead of a photo.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
nice piece, i hate it when you have times like that and no camera.... poopie :( *~*aNDReW*~*


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
I just have a photographic memory!


On Monday August 25th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
An engagingly written, hugely entertaining write...


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Thank you!


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Griffin (134) writes:
really i nicely written, i love the rain. for those reasons. i wish it could come out though the glass of the camera, that would make a great picture


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Some things I look at and wish I had a camera, then I realize that there's a depth to the actual viewing that no camera could properly capture. It's a feeling...


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Stranger (298) writes:
Makes me wish I was child again. This was a clearer picture than film could ever capture.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Mmm. One of few things I got to experience as a child that were good, was the carefree feeling of running through the rain.



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