BACH:Violin concerto in E major

A low twangy Gothic
Deep, from inside
An echo through walls of castles
...they're watching her
She dances about her bed chamber
with scarfs
And everything is sky blue and gold
Wilted flowers
And a solitary
So painful, she screams
SHE SCREAMS!
They all try to hush her
She sings a melancholy song
And the clouds begin to part
But, they are still watching her
and she screams
She indulges in a solitary orgasm
Bites into her brain
Toes curl and she falls
High from the towers above
Such a sweet release
and the ground comes faster
faster, FASTER
Their echoes fade in the halls
She lands soft
They all hush and speak
Final songs
And throw the dirt on her grave

Inspired from what is, in my opinion, one of the most moving peices of music ever composed.

• On Friday, March 4, 2005, Metal Lullaby (55) wrote:
  
  wow...i love this...i love the song...i love this....i love the song.... gj. favorites.
  
  
• On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (411) wrote:
  
  ...'An echo through walls of castles...they're watching her She dances around her bedchamber with scarfs And everything is sky blue and gold'...you paint such wonderful,vivid imagery here,this piece is just spectacular...Butterfly..xxx...
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, subtle incandescence (5) wrote:
  
  This is wonderful! I completely understand. I myself have danced so since the age of nine. This piece is indeed gorgeous. Have you heard it played by Symphonic Orchestra Bamberg with Hanspeter Gmur conducting? I recommend. Very well written!
  
  
• On Monday, December 15, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (666) wrote:
  
  Very creative! Vivid imagery and very dreamlike - good piece. Ciao, T/S
  
  
• On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Daemonicus (610) wrote:
  
  WOW, I bearly know what to say... i adore the imagery, and the... unconventional... use of words. "Such a sweet release"... wow
  
  
• On Saturday, December 13, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (526) wrote:
  
  Great work. The scenery is perfectly described as it is in many of your works. You are such a wonderful talent. Tiger
  
  
• On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Lady_Lilith (105) wrote:
  
  You definitly have a wonderful taste in music. This is a wonderful piece... *sigh* *Why do I love everything about violins?* :) *Lilith*
  
  
• On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Silver Spectre (89) wrote:
  
  Well done and I am impressed. Getting lost in music is the best~Silver~
  
  
• On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  "She indulges in a solitary orgasm" beautifully composed, & painted; this is such a sweet release & as for JS Bach, classical music wasn't even close to his masterful imagery, whom still inspires many rock guitarists.
  
  
• On Friday, September 12, 2003, Markus Porkwing (594) wrote:
  
  Hmm I may just have to listen to that song. I am sure I have before. I love violins, they can be such sad things.
  
  
• On Thursday, September 11, 2003, happymurderer (141) wrote:
  
  That was simply amazing. The words danced in my head and out me in a trance. The words you use and the music he made, sometimes I am amazed at what some people are capable of...
  
  
• On Thursday, September 11, 2003, manywalks (873) wrote:
  
  Ah, now I have a new picture to carry in my mind when I hear this. ~ mw
  
  
• A former member wrote: Very nice! Ive never read a piece like this before. If you think Bach is good,try Tchaicohsky.
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, subtle incandescence (5) wrote:
  
  Tchaikovsky is godlike!!!