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"Look at the Ants" by Brenya Rose

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There are ants on the front porch
I watch them go about in their single file line
Some going left, some going right
Each tiny insect
Stops to converse with another
Their inaudible ant language
And carry their dead
Back to their underground taverns
Such workers, so dedicated
Maybe if we were more like ants....


There are ants when I walk to the grociery store
Plotting in my head what I will say
To the French guy who works there
Today is the day I will talk to him
Only to find it’s his day off
I watch the aphids in the lilies
In the flower section
How I love flowers
So beautiful inside and out
They don’t decieve
Alway beautiful
Even in death, such wonderful scents
Maybe if we were more like flowers....


There are ants when I walk home
Arms full of grocieries
I slowly walk across the blue bridge
The stretches over the lush canyon,
168 Freeway entrance and exit
I watch the homeless sleep
Under bits of cardboard far below in the green
And let the wind wrap around me
Flying in from the giant fluffy white clouds
In an endless blue sky
I gaze at the tall buildings in the distance
You can see everything from up here
And the wind wraps around me
So strong and free
Maybe if we were more like wind....


The ants are still on the front porch
When I get back
I set down the grocieries
And look at the potted flowers
It’s a shame they wont ever root and be free
They are prisoner here
To make welcome the front door
I watch a simple white butterfly
Flutter about the potted baby’s breath
So innocent, sweet
Beautiful, free, honest
Always happy as it floats around
Gorgeous scented nature
Maybe if we were more like butterflies....


There are ants inside the house
Crawling on the candy dish in the kitchen
With my finger
I squish every one of them









We need to change....



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On Saturday July 17th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
im glad i stumbled across your works, like hidden treasures,your poetry is incredible, the imagery and style and colour, and messages, just aweing, this poem is so compelling and fascinating


On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
wow.. this is the second poem i've read of yours and already i know i'll be reading them all... i absolutely LOVE your style.. this poem was particularly wonderful, it has kind of a neverending insane flow to it.. i love it... the ending was lovely too


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Stranger (297) writes:
You definitely took me for a journey with this one. While reading it I was lost and drifting and learning. When I was finished I felt as if I had woken from a dream; but unsure as to whether I was still dreaming or not.


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:
A very beautiful poem indeed. You have a keen eye for things in life. I hate ants, yet I can't help admire what they do. We are like ants. This is a great poem.


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Liz (401) writes:
Honestly, I like the line "I squish every one of them" better than your call for change. Because I feel like the whole poem was about needing to change, and violence was a strong ending.


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Liz (401) writes:
Wonderful imagery.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
lol, this was cool, and i liked the ending :P, good job *~*aNDReW*~*


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nomad (49) writes:
I like the way you set up the repetition ("maybe if we were more like...") interspersed with personal scenes/situations. The comparison drives your end conclusion home all the more so. Never a dull read.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
Wow, the end was a snap back to reality. So many wonderful things going on, yet we suck! Or something like that. Well anyways, I love the write, and the message behind it. Good job.



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