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Ocean Angels Cry

I can hear her weeping
Her sorrowful cry drifting through
My welted sub-conscious
Like Christmas waves leaping against
Emptiness
Running along the shore as if the
Demons who bring the bleak the
Demons who bring the thunder
Chase the ocean angels for their beauty
She weeps as pure as light
Like a song
Such a beautiful song
Should I smile or
Should I cry but
I am for sure floating through her teary relics
It is in but a soft whisper
She beckons for the roses to be
Graciously dropped into her pools
That wept of hymn
One hundred violins race through her brittle facade
As silent as the night
Yet as violent as the wind
She cries as beautiful as an ocean angel
Her tears scream a symphony
I am just a jealous observer
Caught in the lovely song
Dreaming in time to the rhythmic beats
Drowned by each sob
A metaphor compared to scars
Her tears are shooting stars
So beautiful yet
So sad

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On Sunday October 8th, 2006, Circe Avalon (179) writes:

Very gorgeous I was jealous over your mermaid-like angel

On Monday January 31st, 2005, AniDayz (1236) writes:

this is beautiful...sad and so poetic. such a wonderful use of metaphor. i love it.

On Monday December 13th, 2004, Simply Me (53) writes:

Oh wow...this is perfectly beautiful. It makes me not want to post any of my work again because it's nothing compared to yours. You are amazing. :)Simply amazing.

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:

I....I think something...just..flew into my eye...*blinks away tears*

On Thursday September 25th, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:

This is truly beautiful. I had read this before but I was needing beauty so I had to come and read this again... Very nice work... *sigh* *Lilith*

On Monday August 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:

this was very breath taking. . she may be beautiful outside.. but you .. you have a gift. . never let anybody tell you other wise you are truly blessed... i wish i could write half as well as you ... * EyES *

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Eunoia (2) writes:

it is not the story or the tale of the lore that propels me, but the jealous observer of these ocean angel melancholy that renews hope to me in such a fragile system

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:

lovely

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

For some reason this reminds me of someone that has murdered his lover and dumped her body in the ocean and is reflecting the love they had as her body sinks. He hated her, so he killed her, yet he still...

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

notices that she is beautiful, "an Ocean Angel". His insane mind then wrote the above poem while her body sank. Very disturbing and it first brought up the Lacy Peterson case here in CA. Heard of that case?.

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