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In Remembrance

Happiness;
A bliss, and like all others an ignorance
Look upon your hands from your knees knowing this day was to be eternally yours
ending in regret.
depression;
slavery;
for one day, you could have had it all
selling your soul;
in remembrance of me...

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On Monday June 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

I belive the "seeling your soul" part was qute amazing. You made that line so perfectly because it brought our attention to how powerful the meaning was and how much this person wanted to remember you

On Monday May 31st, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:

I love your style...it's very unique..the last lines sold it for me, as well.

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

wow-i have heard the script read in the opposition but never from this POV. "selling your soul; in remembrance of me... " wow. such power. your pounding down doors of bounding andrew. im loving it yet again.

On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1804) writes:

yea dude.. ending took me flying. good stile you got going here.. *thumbs up*

On Thursday May 6th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

I really like the third line... I had to read it a couple of times and the flow and rhythm of it is marvellous.

On Thursday May 6th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

short but very powerful.. much love on this one.. *Tears*

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