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The Past

A moment of my life
When smiles were real
And you became my first
And my last
In just one night

My tears might find justification
But not for you
Pending all that i am
For one heart beat
I’ll remember this moment
Always

Time will fade
My heart will go on
Never to stop for you again

Your face once spelt love
In a language I only knew
All I see is crimson

You must feel big
To criticize all that I am
All that I’ve done
All that I’ve said
In just one night

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On Sunday March 5th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

Oooh..wow...I can relate...

On Monday May 31st, 2004, evolve (2231) writes:

This one will linger in my mind for a while...because of its purity.

On Monday May 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

This definately reminds me of a couple of incidents...it took away my trust and only made me lust for others...I am just now beginning to get over all of this after 4 years...it was good~~~chance

On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, Jane (59) writes:

Wow... this was so painful to read. It's was bleeding with emotion and beautifully written!

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

This one knocked me back a bit, simply because it's simple but conveys something intense so beautifully... it sounds like you mean it so much, it's not random words, it's really there. the way you break lines "this moment, Always"... wonderful... sue

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

every human in the world bares criticism on the first meeting. no matter how open minded you may be. sometimes i hate the way the mind works.

On Thursday February 26th, 2004, nell (328) writes:

beaitfull write full of emotion, i liked the last stanze alot, it adds a wondefull impact which makes u think

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

This poem embodies such raw emotion. I love it... "My face once spelt love in a language I only knew.." I love that line.

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:

"Time will fade / My heart will go on / Never to stop for you again" ...i all too well can relate. excellent write

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