DarkPoetry -|- _Andrew_ -|- Falling Star

Falling Star

A new born star
Radiance unaltered
Untouched
Unscathed
Hope rides with its eloquent light

Time

Eons of life
Watching
Civilizations are founded
Built
Over time
The fall and rise of empires
Bare witness to the creations of man

Death

Unavoidable
As time passes
As does death
As those that kept this star company fade
Only the passing of time is the feeling left to her

Observation,

A way of life

Watching
Waiting
Alone she stares
Her time is neigh
But her light remains unaltered by times hand
(It fails to show)

Radiance

The star dies
As does this girl
Her face
An unaltered illumination
No matter what life held
Hope shone through
And gave us all hope

Bare witness to the death of purity

Unnoticed
Never taken into consideration
All pause to partake in the beauty of her death
She shone brighter than ever that day
As she fell out of the midnight sky

She took our breath with her last…

(Make a wish)

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on Falling Star

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Friday March 11th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:

this was superb!!! i love you!

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

"She took our breath with her last…". .the ending to this left me feeling numb almost. . awesome write

On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

"All pause to partake in the beauty of her death She shone brighter than ever that day As she fell out of the midnight sky". .wow, I'm truly stunned. .completely left amazed.. . truly exquisite, and elegant. . beautifully written. .

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

Oh wow, this piece was one of my favorites, I'm so glad you reposted it

On Monday May 31st, 2004, evolve (2246) writes:

Wow..so delicate...like a fairy tale. Absolutely breathtaking...the death of purity line got me to thinking.

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

this is definately may favorite by you. very gorgeous...i am quite speechless. i didnt think i would run into something like this.

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

ok,am i the onyl one that noticed i sounded like a retard when i left that commment?

On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

goddamnit...a most impressive piece+fallen one+

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

I intensely enjoy the way your write. I don't think i can say much more than that. ->Infamous Motherfuckin Sue

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

this is really good.

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/2055/31328 on Friday October 10th, 2008 07:34 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)