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Bitter Sweet

Love

A feeling

All we have
All we hold
All we dream to have

Happiness

A feeling

All we searched for
Longed to have
To hold
Forever
Never
To let go

I had
I lost
I found
All of this in you

A comfort
A feeling
Freedom
All of this in you

Tonight
I shed my tears
Crystal clear
For you

My love for you ran dry with my eyes
To cleanse the pain my eyes beheld
All of this
For you

You became my everything
You took
Only to leave
With three words

I Love You

Tonight
I shed my tears
I shed them all for you
For all we could have had
And all we could have been…

As the numbness evades my lips…
Evading my fingertips…
I realize…
I have no regrets

Only you

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On Monday January 17th, 2005, dropsofhate (55) writes:

i like this a lot.

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:

ahh, this is brilliant. awesome write, unbelievable flow and construction. beautiful. Thank you.

On Sunday July 18th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:

wonderful. i can definately feel this. A_C

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

Can't believe I haven't read you in so long, and how much do I miss your old works

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

Love, Crystal

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

This reminds me alot of how you and I used to be James, times do change, and so does your gift for writing, which only gets better

On Monday May 31st, 2004, evolve (2231) writes:

The repetition in this piece and the way you set it up is perfect...phenomenal job.

On Tuesday May 4th, 2004, Jane (59) writes:

God, I love your writing. It's so pure and emotional! It gives me chills.

On Saturday May 15th, 2004, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:

Oh yes...I've read enough of your poems to know you totally deserve to be in my fav list! Velvet.

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

i love the evasion verse. beautiful. i loved also how you ended it. well done..

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

"As the numbness evades my lips… Evading my fingertips… I realize… I have no regrets" what the hell was i saying before. those lines are incredible. o by god...i know this feeling completely. the acing...i was running from the infamy those lines

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

held for me. from within...this was awesome.

On Thursday May 13th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

by the way, this is now a favorite.

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

i agree. the last few words always end up meaning the most. i dig it. <3

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

Mercilessly Beautiful. "evades my lips, evading my fingertips." the last portion grasped me. Wonderful. ->Infamous Motherfuckin Sue

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