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"5 Second Breakdown" by Rachel

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It's like a hurricane.

Just when you think it's over
(you've survived)
you realize...

You were only in the eye.


Copyright 2005 Rachel

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On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (525) writes:
yep... aint it the truth


On Monday February 27th, 2006, Thorn (440) writes:
God damn. (Interperate that how you will, I meant many things by it.)


On Monday September 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:
awsome, really makes you realize that all people can hae a stroke of ignorance.


On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Elise (267) writes:
God Rachel, you hit the nail on the head. I feel this so much right now. This is so powerful..so real.


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...does that then make it ten seconds...?


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Rachel (393) writes:
No one likes you.


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...just the way I like it. :)


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
I concur, very shibby. Feel this way pretty often, usually a few jello puddin pops even the score and then I get to use the catch phrase "And on the 7th day he creatd jello puddin pops and they were fuckin great!" ~Ship!


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Rachel (393) writes:
You're silly. :P


On Monday May 30th, 2005, Ravenblade (275) writes:
I can relate to that...nothing else to say...>Raven


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, Astra Dei (645) writes:
well said


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
....... ::Speechless::


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, PaperPromises (77) writes:
Short but it carries such an incredible depth of relating to the concept -Cor


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, sIo (892) writes:
damn...just damn.



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