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"A piece of my heart died today -and-" by Rachel

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A piece of my heart died today
-and-
I can't make sense
of anything.

Childish tears don't compare
to those shed with no alternative.

Sip away at the crystal clear.
What used to numb pain now only causes more.
And where do we go from here?

We can never go back again
Forward hurts too much
and sides take you nowhere.

Where do we go from here?

A piece of my heart died today
-and-
There is no cure this time.


Copyright 2005 Rachel

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On Sunday June 5th, 2005, Reverend Machine (91) writes:
As if words so easly poured from your soul upon canvas to paint a portrait of sorrow even God stood in aww at your master peice...-Dark


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Yesterday (27) writes:
Oh gee, this is sad. But so heart felt. This is beyond a great write, though. Wonderful job.


On Monday May 30th, 2005, Ravenblade (274) writes:
Again, this is a very heartbreaking write, and very much emotion poured out here, I can't even begin to express how sad something like this makes me just reading it....I hope things get better for you...>Raven


On Friday May 27th, 2005, serotonin lost (219) writes:
sit still and wait for the pain to clear, great poem i really liked it.


On Friday May 27th, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (44) writes:
well written I enjoyed it


On Friday May 27th, 2005, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
the epicenter of the heartbreak is always the worst because devastation is all around you, like you said you can't go in any direction.



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