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"A piece of my childhood died today -and-" by Rachel

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A piece of my childhood died today
-and-
I'm still staring at the sky
waiting for the stars to return.
[They must have grown weary with the monotony
     of
astronomers and hopeless romantics.]

Chalk it all up to experience
and a tiny glass, no longer half empty.

Waiting for the red.blue.red.blue.white.light
to tell me I've gone too far this time,
but it never comes.
And I can't tell if I'm more relieved or disappointed
in knowing I've given myself another chance
to fail.

Smoke floods the window and I can't see
through all this water.
But I keep going, hoping for the worst.


When it comes down to it,
this much pressure is necessacery
to open my eyes once more.




A piece of my childhood died today.
-and-
I'll never forget him.






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On Saturday December 29th, 2007, italianbella (275) writes:
this was amazing beautifully done


On Monday May 30th, 2005, Ravenblade (273) writes:
Wow, I really can't find the words for this piece, I can only imagine how hard this must've been for you. Just because something dies, doesn't mean its time to forget it...>Raven


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
Awesome write, perfect words in all the right places, I agree with Urban, the third stanza was amazing...well written.


On Tuesday May 24th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:
3d stanza rocked me, the rest was great as well. These moments never seem to cost a thing and yet seem to carry the heaviest prices. Nicely done:) ~Ship!


On Tuesday May 24th, 2005, BleedSilver (372) writes:
Very surreal and captivating... I love your originality and concept for this one.


On Tuesday May 24th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:
This is in a way sad and dream like. Very interesting :)



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