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"Empty skies" by Rachel

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The sky is too empty, or
my eyes are closed again.
Just tell me I look beautiful tonight
so I can forget.
Erase this moment, this here and now,
because everytime things start to look up,
I wake to find myself at the bottom.
It's a long walk from here with blisters on my feet
and threadbare shoes.

What, exactly is one to do
when the counselor needs counseled
or the doctor needs a nurse?
Someone call an ambulance, I'm suffocating.
Jab a needle in my arm
so I can at least fall asleep with the
drip
drip
drip
of a saline solution keeping me company.

All I wanted was someone to sleep next to tonight.
This bed is too goddamned big.
It's 4:23 in the morning.
Where are you?



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On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, island warrior (302) writes:
very well written.


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
wow rachel....very vivid images here...i really liked the whole peice...but the last lines really got me...


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:
amazing nicely expressed


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
Raw and sincere... the way poetry should be. You portayed this emotion so vividly, rach. VERY nicely done. I've missed reading you, indeed. -Glass


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (45) writes:
wow i felt this....awesome write!


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:
your pain echoes in my soul after partaking of this melancholic masterpiece. bravo. much love.-zay


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, Raven (377) writes:
I hear you... The bed always seems a lot bigger and colder afterwards, doesn't it..*sighs*... Very nicely described


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
This brought me such feelings of distress. So well expressed. Awesome



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