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Written with Revolting Theatre. (He wrote the gray parts. ;) )


My life is so horrible.
Why do I even try?
No matter what happens,
I'll always want to die.

Your life isn't black enough.
You're living one big lie.
I'm so goth I drink cat blood
while committing suicide.

You don't know what you're talking about.
You've never felt this much pain.
Even God hates me!
My skies are filled with rain!

Your rain is a gift in my dark earth
it only hails here.
And everyone's dad beats them!
And we cry blood instead of tears!

My earth is so much darker.
You don't understand the need.
I cut myself just to feel pain!
Do you want to watch me bleed?

You lie, wicked white witch!
When you cut yourself you get hugs.
When I start to saw off my thumb,
I get arrested, because I do harder drugs!

Your life's a walk in the park.
All your problems have easy answers.
You say you have it so bad?
Oh yeah? Well... I had cancer!

Oh yeah, I'll kill myself now.
Prove to you I'm better.
I have an all black gun, all that's left
is to pull the freakin' tri-*gunshot*

A gun? You little coward.
Now I'll kill myself, too.
But before I go, here's a poem.
I wrote it just for you.

(I call it "My Black Is Darker Than Yours")

"I'll prove my life was worse
by listing my favorite words.
Blood, cut, bleed, black, scream.
Black, blood, bleed, bleed, bleed.
Blood, cut, scream, scream, scream.
Death. Deathidy Death death death. Times two."


Now, as I lay down and cry,
while swallowing a bottle of pills,
tell my mother not to cry
After I...















(wait for it...)

















(wait for it...)













Die! *falls over*



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On Friday April 4th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
lmao... this is great... I got sarcasm all over me know.... I'm soaked! excellent fun.


On Friday April 4th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
Um... *now* all over me... now.. fingers! sheesh.


On Friday April 4th, 2008, Kui (703) writes:
Ha!


On Monday February 26th, 2007, dead_inside (45) writes:
everytime i read this i love it more, one of the best poems/rhymes i ever did read!


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (272) writes:
ha. so cynial, and yet hilarious at the same time. nice write. ~lauren~


On Sunday December 25th, 2005, weyvern (103) writes:
this is AMAZING it is sensational truely i am shocked! brilliant bit of poetry and im sure god couldnt hate such beauty


On Sunday December 25th, 2005, dead_inside (45) writes:
wow, i'm speechless


On Monday September 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (57) writes:
holy shit... THIS IS TOO GOOD! :D:D:D


On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Dark_Goddess (20) writes:
Intense. Wonderful write both of you, I liked the conversation of it.


On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
wow. this is awesome. your... great!


On Friday March 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (14) writes:
i really did enjoy reading that...it was very intense for a while and then at the end had humor to it...awesome!


On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (227) writes:
This is farking godly. Excellent work.


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
I STILL love this...


On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed (26) writes:
I sadly enough know people that try to compete on which has the worst life. And any time I mention something that sucks about my life they automatically start spouting off all the reasons their life sucks more...it's really annoying


On Sunday December 19th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (575) writes:
this is awesome. . truly nice piece


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:
wonderful write much enjoyed


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Raven (367) writes:
This made my day... thanks you two..*smiles*


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
heheheh. "Deathidy Death death death" - heeee...! This was much fun.


On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
love it guys. you did an incredible job on this


On Friday December 10th, 2004, leyos (5) writes:
i love it. very dark but yet has a bit of humor at the end. very good ending to lighten the mood of the poem but not the severity.


On Friday December 10th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
I'd say I love you, but it would not do this justice...Rachel, Theatre, you are my heros!


On Friday December 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
lol thats great!


On Friday December 10th, 2004, VenomPlease (176) writes:
Ha this was fucking hilarious. Genuis, guys, just genius


On Friday December 10th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:
what is this about?


On Friday December 10th, 2004, Rachel (394) writes:
You.



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