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You're an artist.

You've painted your world
in perfect black and white.
Thick lines with definition.
There's nothing grey here.
You're precise in your decisions.
No color. No curves.
Only black and white.
Nothing more, nothing less.

Then you met me.

Where do I fit in?
I don't match this puzzle.
But, still, you've decided to
paint me into your picture.
A bright pink rose amidst
your black and white decor.
I'll stand out like charcoal
in a room full of diamonds.
No matter how much blending
and smearing you do,
I'll still be the pink
in your black and white world.

I'm going to ruin your painting.

I never asked to be painted
in the first place.
That's the last thing I want.
Paint is too permanent.
I'd rather be drawn in pencil.
Easily erased and forgotten.
So fuck me one more time
tell me that you love me
and I'll tell you I don't care.
I'll shatter you eventually.
You're formed with glass
and I with stone.
This could never work.
Continue your mission
a black and white world.
Don't let me break you down.
Forget I ever existed
and I'll walk away quietly.

But I'm keeping the rose.



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On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Please Press Reset (163) writes:
the entire poem was great. a misfit in a realm of black and white but the last line was, for some reason, utterly amazing


On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:
wow


On Thursday August 4th, 2005, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:
a true artist would never paint their world in black and white...a true artist could create somewhere for you to belong... ~lauren~


On Wednesday August 3rd, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:
This was beyound words. NOthing I could ever say will do this justice. -kitty


On Wednesday May 18th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:
One of the few times I've been speechless!


On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, indefined (726) writes:
godamn this still moves me when i read it. sigh.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, blue (1780) writes:
bittersweet; very honest. i really enjoyed this. b


On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:
tingly:)


On Friday November 5th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:
wow, this was very beautifully done. i love the.. title, and the whole meaning behind the poem that i get. nice ending as well.. beautiful


On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (629) writes:
This was amazing, but I picture you like the diamond in a bag of charcoal..I love the ending and I admire your talent. ^_^


On Monday October 25th, 2004, Lotophagi (459) writes:
just awesome.... and I second all other comments. Thank you.


On Friday October 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
oh wow..rachel. this was classic. in the most fragile of ways. you speak so well in your poetry...so articulated. its just the magic of your pen i suppose...but this is incredible.


On Friday October 22nd, 2004, indefined (726) writes:
awesome. utter awesomeness. i'm at a loss for words, seriously. wow.


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (183) writes:
Simply Amazing. Its Gotta Be Made Into A Film... Or Something... I Need To Read More Stuff Like This! GPhD.


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, Seraphic (301) writes:
that took an unsuspected turn half way through...that third stanza, I love it. like avoider said, the entire thing being metaphorical, wonderful. *~seraph~*


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:
Rach *bows* this is godlike...damned freaking wonderful!


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, Zhee (642) writes:
this was wonderfully conceptual...i love the way you ended it.. flawless work!


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, BleedSilver (377) writes:
Very sobering...'So fuck me one more time tell me that you love me, and I'll tell you I don't care.' That is rough...very rough...-hands you a pink rose-


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:
That's amazing. I love how everything is so metaphorical(?).


On Thursday October 21st, 2004, Lydia Jade (796) writes:
fucking awsome!!....i loved this one beyond words....really....im putting this on my favs!



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