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"Nostalgic" by Rachel

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When I remember you
giggling like a school-boy
crying countless tears
of happiness

Or

When I think of you
in your bedroom
gun in hand
making that last decision
as selfish as a child


I weep for you;
my Everything
who used to be my big brother
Through thick and thin you were there.

You jerk.




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On Monday August 22nd, 2005, NumbInside (37) writes:
love the comparison between the two different times


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:
ouch...suicide-the ultimate selfishness-makes a good case for us to remind those we love, that that love exist. a stronger poem of yours because of the raw ferocity of emotion that, though not bereft of intellect, is not slavishly bound by it. nice.


On Friday October 22nd, 2004, indefined (716) writes:
Fuck me...


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
The last two words are actually the strongest.. when you understand the emotion of it, the bitterness.. this was so painful. astounding work, to say the least.


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, sweetambrosia (103) writes:
I loved the poem, but for the last line... while it conveys your anger... it does not convey your sadness at him being gone. Still a wonderful piece. --sweets


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, sweetambrosia (103) writes:
I really hope that wasn't inappropriate... I have only the deepest of respects for you, and works such as this.... --sweets


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Rachel (393) writes:
lol, don't worry, I'm always up for constructive critiques. :) And I wrote this a long, long time ago, not long after he died. More than anything, I was pissed off at him at this point. When you love someone so much, it's easily confused with hate some


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Rachel (393) writes:
sometimes. That's more of what this is. I'm not sure if this makes more sense now or not. lol Either way. :)


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, evolve (2231) writes:
Shit.


On Tuesday September 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
wow.shivers.. thats all i can say



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