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I Wrote a Poem For You

I wrote a poem for you.
It's not very good
but it took a lot of
blood
sweat
and tears.
Many, many tears.
More than I can count.
This poem contains
my deepest feelings
about life
about death
about you.
It is so perfect...
The best poem
I've ever written.
So perfectly expressed.
I'd like to show you
this poem.
But, unfortunately,
I lost it.
And I can't remember the words.

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On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, Liz (406) writes:

this poem is like tribute by the D

On Friday April 20th, 2007, carlosjackal (1653) writes:

:) Love it!!!!! -Carl

On Friday March 30th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

Now this is clever...I like it... =] -_OttO_-

On Sunday September 17th, 2006, Bluegirl (248) writes:

This one make me smile. :)

On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

lol this was kinda funny but serious.. i liked it..

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:

lovely felt it speak to me -kitty

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

loved this. absolutely loved it...i'll take this and run with it. because it has a few things i can relate to.

On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, blbhd (22) writes:

I realy liked your poem. Its as if you wana say what you feel but hold back.

On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, SilverPagan (30) writes:

Very, very nice.

On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Deliverence (799) writes:

Well, its a loss, but a gain, because at least you can somewhat describe this perfect poem..even that is beautiful enough.-Kefkism

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:

I love clever poems. There is genius in any clever poem like this that has not been done before, and this is one I have never seen. ;)

On Friday March 4th, 2005, Velvet_Raventon (695) writes:

Yes, it is genius. Wonderful poem. ~V.

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, Audrey_Star (29) writes:

"my deepest feelings about life about death about you." the repitition works really well here.

On Friday October 10th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

Haha.. thats soo true.. nice one.. :o)

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:

your right i do like it, thanx alot, it actually made me feel better about losing my poem

On Sunday May 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

a poem about a lost poem... I would never have thought of it - but it's bloody genius isn't it?! I adore this piece... absolutely Godlike...

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Rachel (393) writes:

Thanks, I appreciate your words.

On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, Malkavai (12) writes:

very unique. I absolutely love it!!!

On Friday March 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:

this is a good poem, like malkavai said, its not like anything else out there.

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