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laid body over, folded
Blue lined lady
collapsed on top of building blocks
distressed mouth belting red screams
,scrambled egg eyes
in a city among fluttered red color,
drowning in scrambled pixels

sectioned palett life
crimson stoplight sky billows through my weeping willows

veiny light
red plum pit splat
blacked out streets amongst beheaded flowers
stitched seam back makes scars blueprinting hearts
puzzle pieced chromoshome
makes fuzzy face droopy mustache

sunfire woman in a filthy red town.

(*this was just a rant i went on today i haven't structured it or moved things around at all but i just wanted to put something up so yes this is very much in progress.*)



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On Saturday March 31st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
Crazy, surrealist imagery and a cracking title - Fear not, this was more than just a 'rant', this was beautifully exorcised poetry :)


On Monday May 17th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
the scrambled stanza struck me something fierce... splendid write... sue


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
Well, unstructured? Gives this deceptive depth, nervy feel while reading, I rather like it as it is. ~ mw



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