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Awake!

Awake!Fair child
for the sun has set

Eyes pinned wide

She bleeds into the stars

her body quivers for
the sight of light engulfed in darkness
watching her beloved
warms her unaged blood

Skin of pale rose petals
eyes with coal centers

)in progress...ah i hate this one.._) i cant get it to come out right!)

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On Monday April 12th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

i know it would be typical to say it came out fine. but if the poet isnt happy with their work. then whats the point right? its for you-no one else:)

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

I really like the language in this: "She bleeds into the stars", " Skin of pale rose petals / eyes with coal centers"; intense visuals.

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, fuck you (30) writes:

Reminds me of a drawing I once drew. Pretty creepy. Babies head, a cross, worms...well I'll show it to you sometime...

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Alanarchy (1692) writes:

Good so far. I can't wait to read the finished product.

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