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Tear your web away

The end illuminates
Shattered clouds,
screaming violens.
Thick blood,
Red sand sheets.

The relentless pounding sound of discontent
tears that burn,
The touch you wish you couldn't feel

Hardly real.

cracked open on a dining room table
I bear my parasites.
Termites eat at my bones,
as i masturbate to the pain.

In Progress.

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On Monday May 17th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

you rock... that last stanza is an image no one could come close to. call that original sin... your wording is intense.... Sue

On Monday April 12th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

holy shit..the ending it chilling. creeps me out.

On Monday September 15th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:

I agree with worm...raw emotion...

On Monday September 15th, 2003, worm (131) writes:

raw... emotional... and cryptic in it's message... I must tell you, AD, this is a good poem! I REALLY like it!

On Sunday September 14th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

First of your works that I have come across. I must go check everything else out now ^-^.

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Ditto.

On Friday September 12th, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

pretty good so far. it could stop where it is , the angst and articulation,very sharp........urban

On Monday August 25th, 2003, Nadir (630) writes:

I like it allready. I enjoy open and complex endings alot ... Tiger

On Friday August 15th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

"Termites eat at my bones, as i masturbate to the pain" - that is without question, one of the coolest things I have ever read; ever!

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, Six-Out (1823) writes:

I'm liking where this is going. Can't wait to see the finished product.

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, Silent_Raven (23) writes:

i love this, i agree with six-out, very eager to see the final cut. *RAVEN.*

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