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You want warm blood
String me up,
blue,purple tinged feet wrigling in my vision
Walk past me in your quiet conversation
fill
me ahhh ah ohh ohh
I saw graveyards, so sensitive,
turn back, they're lonely.
doused in red, lay me down
ah the eyes, 6 feet underground

Dark light bordering your bolted door
put your weight down,it comes through,
can't be seen by your little babies eyes
ah your little babies eyes
you had to be someone to her.

A drunken punchout.
i dont.
know.
why.
i.
die.
inside.
at.your.
time.
chewing and waiting,
skanky fridge and a drunk complexion.

live in the unknown to preserve your flesh
don't put your ow bones on the bridge
easy, dig a hole.
Hit me, let me fall back
put me inside
let me turn black.
drag myself out with the cats.
Pin me on the wall, speculate, spit

dont put me inside, put me inside, don't put me inside,
don't don't don't don't
put me inside

throbbing brain forcing itself against the infastructure of my skull.

You crazy rose.





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On Friday March 24th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:
i like it...i love it, nice write....~


On Monday May 17th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
your poetry makes me feels as though every hint of air is gone... and i am gasping to have your glamour.... Sue


On Monday April 12th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
you are the true exmplaray poet of darkpoetry. wow...not a light at the end of the tunnel. not a bulb to be seen.


On Saturday March 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:
i should of known that it would be interesting..just looking at your name.. ashtraydirt.


On Thursday November 27th, 2003, Alanarchy (1618) writes:
Thought provoking in its vagueness. still, very emotional. brilliant wording. You have a talent.


On Friday September 12th, 2003, Bast (899) writes:
it flows, but not smoothly... jerky, it jolts and flashes in my head. i like that. some of your phrasings in here are phenominal. :D


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
kewl I liked the words and the confusion I felt at every word made me think


On Tuesday September 9th, 2003, worm (131) writes:
well I got to admit that this one caught me by surprise! I still don't know what to say... but I just had to say something! thanks for making me think!


On Friday September 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:
I die inside...at your time....I like this. the poem is really exciting...


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
This poem grabbed me by the back of my head and smacked it against brick wall. Thank you; I needed that.


On Wednesday July 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:
Interesting.


On Saturday July 12th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
i wish i could understand poems like this one. it would make them more beautiful. -B


On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
this is weird... i liked it. "a drunken punchout" was a particularly neat line.. not sure what it means, but like it alot. welcome to DP.



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