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Ravenous

Your mouth is a ravenous creature
Attempting to satisfy a need
It hunts the expanse of my skin
Seeking my quickening pulse points

I am prey to your mouth
A repetitive feast of seduction
A paralyzed victim of lust
Devoured at your leisure

Your lips stalk the trails of my limbs
Lured by pheromone scent
Stalking sharp exhalations
Drawing forth primal moans

Your mouth is a carnivorous creature
Hunting for survival
Seeking a mate
Eager to lock into a battle of submission

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On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:

wow this was sinister and saucy...and got my blood flowing in a delightful way ;) ~kristy

On Friday January 21st, 2005, stormtalk (881) writes:

Darkly romantic... my favorite. The depth with which you dissect the idea of mouth-as-primal-creature is a pleasant change from the usual fleeting glances poets here pay to their ideas. Very well-done... and most enjoyable to read.

On Sunday January 23rd, 2005, Recycled (161) writes:

Thank you. This comment is better than most.

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, mysticventures (537) writes:

wicked !!!

On Sunday January 16th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

"A paralyzed victim of lust Devoured at your leisure" ........Awesome write! i loved it!

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