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Tunnel

Love is a tunnel entered blindly
Dug into the side of the mountain of desire
A passageway to passion
It holds the blackness of uncertainty

Love is a tunnel unmapped
No other can lead your way
Your outcome rests on your decisions
Left is equally fearsome to right

Love is a tunnel with no light
You do not see where it leads
Leaving you to search the darkness blindly
It may not lead you to your destiny

Love is a tunnel walked at risk
Each pathway leading to a different future
Leading the unwary to their demise
Void of sounds of reassurance

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On Saturday March 5th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Very true...

On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (94) writes:

you are the god of metaphors and similes. i applaud this work. -zay

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Ophelia (305) writes:

reminds me of that poem by Robert Frost, Which road will I take, I wonder every day which way I should go each mistake, each happy moment, each memory a chance that I know will be one I will treasure, .....O

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Deliverence (797) writes:

Hey, I never thought of love in such a manner...Throught-provoking indeed..I wonder where I shall end once my tunnel has ended..-Kefkism

On Friday November 12th, 2004, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:

I have entered many tunnels only to find they were caves. S.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

Love casted in a pessimistic light.. though I can relate all to well to this comparison. :::OLd

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

My only critique of this is that it is too simply worded, though a poem need not be verbose to be masterful. Your use of metaphor is talented and engaging, I really think this is a mild, yet impressive piece of work.

On Thursday November 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

you hit the nail on the head as the saying goes, Recycled. i've never heard love described like this but i do agree with your description

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