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Time and Place

In another time and place, things would have been different
I would have been a hundred times more sensitive
I would have remained passionate
Spent more time with you
Called more often

In another time and place, things would have been different
I would have fulfilled more dreams
I would have been more charming
Not hesitated to share my feelings
Spoken more poetic words

In another time and place, things would have been different
I would have conquered your fears
I would have held you longer
Gazed into your eyes every single day
Taken you out many more times

In another time and place, things would have been the same
I would have broken your heart
I would have been imperfect
Lost the only thing that mattered
Ended up alone with my tears

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On Thursday November 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:

this speaks such truth. i really liked the way you wrote this. i can relate oh too well! ~sex~

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, Mischevious Princess (53) writes:

I like this poem a lot...It sounds like a lot of the things that go thru a guy's mind just before they get into a relationship. nice write... ~Amber~

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

this is definitely one of those poems I can read all day, like listening to my fav. song lyrics.. and savor each word. truly heartfelt .. -lime.

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, Lost_Soul (39) writes:

*sighs* This poem reminds of a past memory that is identical to this. So, so sad.

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

Now this, my friend, is wonderful. :::OLd

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