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Breakup

I used you
I took everything you had
I was never looking for a commitment
Just a little something to hold me through
I don't care if your precious feelings are hurt
Cry until Christmas if you must
I will not apologize for my actions
You should be used to it by now
I treated you the same as all the others
Isn't this the person you wanted?
You knew how I was before we got started
Did you believe you would change me?

This is all your fault
Maybe I've lied to you
Who on this planet hasn't?
Don?t bother pleading for a second chance
I have a sure thing going on now
I don't want you

You are pathetic if I ever fooled you
Your hallucinations are intense, if you saw love in my eyes
The fire in them isn't for you
Pack your emotional suitcase and take a hike
We are over
Our relationship has taken its last breath

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On Sunday July 18th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

Wow, this sounds a little harsh. Maybe it is because it hits too close to home. I had a friend who went out with a girl and she treated him like shit!

On Saturday February 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i love this, wish i had a poem like this when i broke up with my last boyfriend!!

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I like the part about an emotional suitcase... that was great.

On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Drea (917) writes:

some say harsh...i say she must have did something to get so much harshness.. but then again thats my twisted thinking.. GREAT poem ~Drea~

On Friday November 14th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:

Ick...I wonder, how you wrote this? Seems to harsh...mean...ruthless to be fake. I think we might all have a little of this in us...I hope I never see mine. This scared me Re...but I'm glad to have read it.~JMDW~

On Monday September 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

Ouch...I feel the sting all the way over here. Damn. Wow...damn...

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

there is cruelity in this such as I hope to never have to see or feel.....O.

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

and she should pay attention because life is not always roses and butterflys, that is how she got were she is now, only her head in the clouds, I shall be her anchor,

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, Forever Cold (48) writes:

so harsh , and yet so true.........

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:

Ilove this...on my favs!!!

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