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Fornication Under the Consent of the King

He licks the del-
icate flower

She devours
The mango fruit

They are the beasts
In Babylon

Though they have done
Not a Thing wrong

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On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, saintedmad (1175) writes:

like the almost subversive, subliminal capitalization of "Thing"; what could this 'thing' be?? hmmmm for unlawful carnal knowledge and such... g[r]asping write and so picturesque/burlesque

On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, manywalks (950) writes:

wicked bit of minimalism, masterfully completed

On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, Raven (378) writes:

Short and completely to the point... I like the hyphen in the first line that drapes 'delicate' over the stanza... _Raven

On Friday February 18th, 2005, stormtalk (909) writes:

i'm the beast in your babylon

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Evil (542) writes:

this is crazy. i dont know how to take it. i didnt like it, but somehow i found it sort of captivating? if that makes sense at all.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Clementine (153) writes:

duely noted

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Clementine (153) writes:

yeah supposedlyu this is where the word fuck comes from

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Jonas (867) writes:

carnal truth / romance muddled

On Friday February 18th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

captivating words. beautifully dark! ~sex~

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Bast (896) writes:

beauty. like the flash of an ankle in victorian porn.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, cucuio (212) writes:

oooh, wonderful. And I shall now (hopefully) remember what the initals stand for.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:

FUCK

On Friday February 18th, 2005, cucuio (212) writes:

Yes, but what it stands for *points to title* I can never remember, hopefully now I will

On Friday February 18th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:

*shoots and kills cucu* there, now you need not worry about it..

On Friday February 18th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:

i agree with Kendra...this is very interesting..

On Friday February 18th, 2005, ardneK (101) writes:

O.o interesting...the title seems longer than the write...interesting - >|

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