Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"our last breath" by disposable

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


I'll always see the feathers fly
carried on the wind
catching on the window pane.
I held your hand
and you whispered,
from just this side of heavens door,
in soft round tones, circles of apologies.

I placed my finger on your fading lips
for we should only speak of love in times like these;
I couldn't meet your eyes
so I looked again upon the stars in the midnight sky,
that seemed to be lulling you into them,
with the most gentle of siren songs.

A dove landed on the sill and peered back into me
and I knew it was waiting;
you gave my hand a weak caress
that bore all you needed to say,
I washed you anew with my tears of selfishness
for I knew I must release you.

My eyes closed, without my permission
so I focused on just feeling you there;
then
our last exchange,
swirled around us as if the barest of air;
and all was gone
in a flurry of feathers and stars and wings and song
against a midnight sky;
and I might not see you in the light
but I'll always see the feathers fly.

kg
8-23-07





Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Thursday October 9th, 2008, skully (58) writes:
Beautiful and moving, thanks


On Monday October 6th, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:
Wow, this is just so Beautiful. I think you have touched the hearts of everyone who ever reads this. Very well done!!


On Tuesday October 7th, 2008, disposable (135) writes:
ty so much daughter. everyones kind compliments are definitely narrowing down my best style. ty for the help.


On Sunday October 5th, 2008, thelostmessenger (192) writes:
this is so tragic, i seriously have tears in my eyes. what a beautiful write. i love it.


On Sunday October 5th, 2008, disposable (135) writes:
wow! ty. im very flattered by the depth of ur reaction. very nice compliment.


On Monday September 29th, 2008, Leith Plunkett (320) writes:
i went and hugged my wife. what feelings that conjured. deeply sad but so so beautiful. thankyou


On Tuesday September 30th, 2008, disposable (135) writes:
wow, best complimente ive ever gotten-that you hugged your wife. thank you so very much.


On Monday September 29th, 2008, Rhys Ki (124) writes:
Very touching and heart-breaking, but it has a tinge of hope, does it not? I adore the imagery and the feelings this stirs. Very nice write, and keep at it.


On Tuesday September 30th, 2008, disposable (135) writes:
thank you so much, especialy coming from someone with your imagination. :0) i think i will...



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/18114/113538 on Monday December 01st, 2008 04:10 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)