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"Weak Walls" by Mithiras

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Your walls are weak, they're made of love,
it guards a secret which everyone knows,
it seemed as if it were made to flicker,
everyone knows what happened behind those walls.

My walls are weak, they can't stop me
from what I desire most in this world
into nothing like the fallen leaves
theres nothing that can stop whats to unfold

Your walls are weak, they make you scream
you're trapped within its confines like a mouse in a cage
yet you think you're clever and are able to escape
but no matter what you do you still are contained

My walls are weak, I suffer behind them
the small room I'm stuck behind makes me insane
theres nothing I can do to destroy them
I never needed you more than ever, this is inhumane

Your walls are weak, yet you still cannot break through
you can see their rotting cracking lines of decay
yet no matter how hard you do theres nothing we can do
you sit beside me in spirit yet this wall is blocking our way

My walls are weak, please save me from my self
theres nothing I can do for you except think
but everything you can do for me except help
Our walls are weak so lets band together and rid it forever.

Finally the walls are gone and we're finally united
you placed your slender hand into mine
the feeling is like nothing but the most divine
I told you these walls were weak.



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On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Fantecstasy (103) writes:
I like the alternations. It's a fascinating style I find, to see the contrast which adds an element of distinction to any writing. So, verily, most well done. *tips hat*


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (692) writes:
Best of luck to my bro in finding this woman, and we all need to be saved from ourselves, I think. You'll make some girl lucky. *salutes* A rough patch when what you desire most if either out of reach of unknown, finding the right person can be quite the task


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Mithiras (34) writes:
Don't we know that finding the ones a bitch Haha. Eventually I'll find someone, school will be the first search then Japan the second.


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Ms Moon (615) writes:
*cocks head to ze left* perfect


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Mars (537) writes:
i read the first stanza and it made me want to cry and hurt something. lol. i felt this. big time. -mars


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Mithiras (34) writes:
really? Mike kicking a hole through my wall is kind of an inspiration ...


On Sunday August 17th, 2008, Mars (537) writes:
he did? lol... but it was an awesome write :D



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