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Courting wolves

I wish you kissed like hail on a tin rooftop.
Branding my lips with a ragged exhale
Only allowing me to breathe
you

Punish my skin for knowing any other touch:
capture my elbows and ravish my shoulders with your teeth.
Nip at my thighs,
Rest your brow on my stomach and lavish my womb with promises.

Listen to my lips move,
as you trace the ink down my spine,
because all my words belong to you
and no amount of rendering can make my scribbles on scrap paper
any
less
yours.

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On Wednesday November 19th, 2008, estherbell (108) writes:

raw and passionate, a great read!

On Tuesday August 26th, 2008, batman nipples (2243) writes:

Post more, please. I missed you, Div.

On Tuesday September 30th, 2008, batman nipples (2243) writes:

Pretty please?

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

Brilliant stuff and the title makes absolute sense. -Carl

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, Alanarchy (1698) writes:

Titles are totally optional. I think it's a good idea to play with them. Use them to mess with words, or maybe even give the reader a kodex to interperate the poem any way they'd like. I like your title, it does that nicely. I may not have ended up where you wanted me to be, at the end of your poem. But I still liked where I was. Write on.

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

hmmmm this makes me feel all beastly... I think I need to shave again... hotness *opens a window* I am taken to the line about promises... but there are many sensual lines with unique twists of imagery. very nice.

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, DyingForYourRights (138) writes:

i liked this one good write

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

sorry but where do the wolves come into it?

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

Aw..Bless your cotton socks, Colin..*scarpers*

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, Calypsos Lover (19) writes:

There passion is always just short of violent. I associate with them and therefore the title is indirectly "courting me"

On Monday July 28th, 2008, Calypsos Lover (19) writes:

I'd be willing to elaborate more because there is indeed more to it then just that, if you would care to hear it

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

I had an entirely different idea about where this wolf should come in...

On Monday July 28th, 2008, Calypsos Lover (19) writes:

Where would that be? It's interesting to hear it from another's perspective

On Monday July 28th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

hmmm, but dare I disturb the rapaciousness of this by inserting myself between your lines? I believe this wolf would best come into this... somewhere near "you" ;) But, that is just my perspective.

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

Hehe..Is that a double-entendre I read?

On Sunday July 27th, 2008, saintedmad (1155) writes:

ooo goodness. . this is so aesthetically great and the tone, the images, the voice. . . the nip and tuck allegory of it all. . ..yes. +ness

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