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"Empty gods and Knotted ankles" by Calypsos Lover

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After we held hands,
you rubbed your palms against your jeans
like I was stuck beneath the nails of your fingers;
Clinging between the lines of your callouses.

I hated that you smelled like apples
because I could still detect the faint musk falling off my clothes like moth wings.
The wrinkle between the fine stroke of your brows
told me you smelt it to,
but was
either breathing as little as possible
or to much of a gentleman to comment.
You have always been so much better then human.

Stupid man,
who said you could harbor storm clouds in your eyes?
Or hold me so carefully it made me darken your shirt with tears.

When the gods built me around this emptiness,
you knew we were never meant to have forever.
But still, you watched me sleep in the shadow of your body
and for once
I fit

Had you let me carve my heart from its cage
I would have tucked you away in my chest cavity

Praying silently
that I would fill up with rain.



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On Tuesday September 2nd, 2008, Morbid_insanity (117) writes:
i wish i had someone to feel this with. its so beautiful and it really speaks volumes. as always perfection ;)


On Saturday August 2nd, 2008, Nixx (166) writes:
i always love the imagry you give to me. thank you.


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
captivating imagery... with such mature patience, a slow unraveling that leaps with novelty to crawl with sublimity... and lie down with the intangible. true artistry.


On Monday July 21st, 2008, saintedmad (1155) writes:
adore the closing couplet[s]. . . a powerful and pristine conjuring thing here. . .. . +ness


On Monday July 21st, 2008, Amaryllis (147) writes:
Very beautiful and melancholy at the same time. Nicely done.


On Monday July 21st, 2008, batman nipples (2243) writes:
"I hated that you smelled like apples because I could still detect the faint musk falling off my clothes like moth wings." Oh, how I wish I had written those lines, this entire piece, but especially those lines. I just want to crawl inside this poem and cry because it's exactly how I feel, and I could never say them so eloquently...


On Monday July 21st, 2008, Alanarchy (1698) writes:
This is so lovely. From the title, to the last line, it wraps you in feeling like a jacket. And speaking of those last lines; beautiful. Goddamn. Welcome to darkpoetry.


On Monday July 21st, 2008, Alanarchy (1698) writes:
Heh. Sorry bout that. For some reason I thought you were new. *keyboard in mouth*



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