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"Mourning Morning (edit; Rhys Ki's request)" by heroineyes

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i first met you under an old tree.
An old sailor on my first voyage,
your song rang out like a siren

(now, i wandered and i wondered)

our melodies resonated in harmony

though melody became harmony...
and harmony became dissonance...
while dissonance, once again, became melody...

could i?...
(of course, can is a question of ability)
should i?...
(of course, just to prove you don't)

body through the air,
head first into the concrete,
a shattered spine.

(i told you that you don't)

(as i got up to walk away)

i heard an old willow weeping in the wind.
i flew to the top on broken wings
to comfort it when...

There...

was a lone Girl, sitting amongst the branches.
The thorn in Her side was a mirror image of mine.

suicide, manic, depression...

She sat there gazing into the sky,
naming each star one by one,
so that they might feel love.

She turns...
(and She's beautiful, lovely, almost expectant)
She turns, nonetheless, to me and says (naming),

"I shall call you love, for we've never met"

Now, everynight we soar through the cosmos,
on our broken wings from the top of our old willow...

Hoping the daylight doesn't bring us back down like gravity.




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On Monday October 6th, 2008, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:
wonderful piece...i agree with soul, that line was superb. it almost made me feel jealous that i didn't come up with it first..good work..-l-


On Monday October 6th, 2008, Revisable Retina (148) writes:
Wow!! This poem is wonderfully striking, yet raw.. My new fav -YAY- I'm super stoked I read this, thanks. -rach


On Monday October 6th, 2008, Leith Plunkett (320) writes:
(naming each star one by one, so that they might feel love). This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever heard. entrancing



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