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Do you want to know what its like? This place, this uneven cracked dry ground beneath my feet. The dust it stirs in the wind covering all surfaces, it leaks through holes and cracks consuming all. The heat hotter and more potent than a burning flame. I shower and bathe to get this grim off my skin, with the sweat driping off my flesh. I let all the pain pour off, all the discomfort. As I dry myself, cloth myself, and walk out of the showers, my efforts were to no avail. For walking 60 yards back to my tent, I am already drenched in sweat and covered in dirt. The food is the same, bland stuff as always. They allow the iraqis to work on the base, while some are harmless, others are willing to steal from you and harm you. To not know if you are going to wake, because mortors hit around you as you sleep. You hear stray bullets flying over sometimes. Dreams of home so vivid so real, yet to awake and find you yourself in hells inferno, it is too much to bear. As always, I say, "Ask me anything about this place and I will tell you the truth". Sometimes the truth is just too real for people. So I ask you before you ask me....Do you really want to know what its like?



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On Monday June 23rd, 2008, Nixx (167) writes:
yes. i wish to know.


On Friday June 20th, 2008, downstream (95) writes:
regardless of whether or not we're for the war, or against it - those are debates that embrace "war" as an abstract concept - and its not - and I think (correct me if I'm wrong) that that's the whole point of this poem. Very often we forget the human, the sooo verrrry human aspect of all of this. These are individuals who live, and re-live, on a daily basis horrors that many of us probably haven't even seen in a movie. The constant gut eroding fear of not taking that next step - of death, of an end - always there. That's all besides the weight that these young men and women have to live with the rest of their lives - knowing that they HAD TO KILL. That's all besides the isolation, the deprivation, and the rapture of loneliness - being out in the middle of nowhere. Now I've never been involved in any war - so maybe I don't have the right to speak of things that I've never experienced - but damn it - these are individual human beings here - we're not moving chess pieces or toy soldiers - war is the ruining of lives because a couple of different parties of the powerful couldn't get their shit together.


On Friday June 20th, 2008, downstream (95) writes:
I apologize if I've come off the wrong way, and irregardless of my views, or anyone else's - these individuals, our soldiers, are human beings - they didn't decide where and when to go - or to go to war for that matter - and to be honest neither did the American people (of course that can be debated - but its not the point) - the point is - our troops deserve as much respect and compassion as possible. ~Downstream~


On Friday June 20th, 2008, downstream (95) writes:
again - sorry if I came off the wrong way, much respect After hours (and everyone else).


On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, After hours (622) writes:
I'm not a fan of war but i "completely" appreciate the mindset behind the millions of Americans that support the cause for retribution/resolution/outcome/ and ultimately peace to be accomplished from your services...you didn't have to be an American to feel the "world impact" it had. The most disgusting display of human action along side human genocide, referring to the holocaust...I don't want this to be a controversial comment at all...may you return to your homeland and continue your life...the safest of wishes....& write on brother.



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