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                     My body has I nternal bleeding

                             It feels L ike I’m going to die soon
           One last thing bef O re I go
     I’ll remember you fore V er
                            After th E y bury me six feet deep

                  I can promise Y ou this
                    You’ll be the O nly one
                    I wouldn’t h U nt down :D

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On Monday July 14th, 2008, Ainsof (1806) writes:

I like the way the i nternal makes it possible to read it as I eternally bleed... neat. Is there a subtext to this?

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Chunky (61) writes:

i love you* i forgot the i. um, im not telling you i love you, just pointing it out that it was in the poem? yeah

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Marionette Mars (510) writes:

lol.

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Chunky (61) writes:

love you :P ill be another you wont hunt down! you dont know where i am! Mwhahaha

On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Marionette Mars (510) writes:

i love this work! i love the I LOVE YOU that you wrote and how it goes with the short poem and the title! perfect. once i upgrade, i'm bookmarking it D -mars

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Marionette Mars (510) writes:

:D *

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