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Collective Sin

Collateral Collaboration
Collectively Disintegrating
Holding on to a strand of my own imagination

Proliferation
The liberation of sin
Chaotic Origins

Definitive Politics

The man with many sticks

I can see who they can see
Synonymous
Separated by an apostrophe

Illegal calligraphy

The Signature Not To Pardon Me.

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On Wednesday June 18th, 2008, DIATRICUS (84) writes:

This took me a couple of reads... I especially enjoyed the last two lines. You have a wonderful sense of minimalist capture -- a tremendous technique. Thank you.

On Monday June 16th, 2008, skully (59) writes:

Nice, good word play and works on different levels. Confusingly good.

On Sunday June 15th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

this had a very stream of conscious flow but perhaps with more meaning behind it than first registered. Nice slam-like rhythm, would make a great stage effort with it's homophony; short but with plenty impact; political, heartfelt and emotional, very nice Susu...

On Friday June 13th, 2008, Mab (973) writes:

I don't necessarily understand this, but I enjoyed it all the same :)

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