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Blade

Slowly my little friend crept out
Of hiding
And danced along my skin.

I slowly let my wound open up
And let my friend, now dressed in red,
Cut a little deeper.

authors note: written for my poetry project as my personification poem. i turned it in to ms. bartz, WORST english teacher ever, may her soul rot in hell.

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On Saturday August 30th, 2008, Wolfaerie (127) writes:

This was such a vivid personification. Funny that I also saw a little blade red man dancing on flesh. And I understand having those teachers...what asses lol

On Sunday June 15th, 2008, DyingForYourRights (133) writes:

good stuff!!!

On Sunday June 15th, 2008, Bunny Manic Moon (612) writes:

i can actually see a little boy, less than an inch tall. silver skinned. walkin length along the veins. leaving little bloody footprints. ^_^ i likes

On Sunday June 15th, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:

thanx :D

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