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God
Turned me away
When I asked for help
And because of that, my life

Is
A lie.
I believed that god
Would make my life

Full,
Whole, complete.
I believed, with all my heart and soul
But now I know, it was a web

Of
Lies that I got tied up in.
Lies I somehow came to believe.
But now I know, that its all a load of

Shit.
That he never was and never will be.
That god will never love me
Because he doesn’t exist.



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On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (460) writes:
very nice. i know how it is, i was christian my whole life, and not once did i have a spiritual awakening until i converted to a different religion. god, to me, also seems like bullshit. :)


On Tuesday June 24th, 2008, chrome arctic (24) writes:
perfect write. direct line to a thought everyone must have


On Thursday June 19th, 2008, chrome arctic (24) writes:
amazing write.


On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, Chunky (49) writes:
maybe he just isnt here to see us now? maybe hes away and not all knowing.


On Wednesday June 4th, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
i like that theory


On Sunday May 25th, 2008, Aleas (241) writes:
I've come to find that I'm a lot better off when I realize that I'm the one responsible for my own happiness. I've never been let down by anyone I didn't allow. I believe placing blame on anything else only blinds us from what it is we truly need to do. I have nothing bad to say about the poem, either, it's very clever. But like most things I read here on this site, I just believe it's misguided anger.


On Monday May 26th, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
ya, it pretty much is, but i dont mean to blame god, i just dont believe anymore. i have no problem with anyone who does, its just not for me, and i get really annoyed when people try to convert me and assume that im too closed minded to even give it a chance when they dont actually know my story.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, Mars (517) writes:
i believe the same thing. i don't believe in god becasue he let me down before. i lost my faith so i don't have anything bad to say about this poem. i understand what you feel and at the moment i feel the same. only i have more faith in other things than just god. and i do think that God Is Full of Shit. great write, welcome to DP. -mars


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
ya, a lot of people dont get it, its not something thats easy to understand if u believe strongly unless youve been there.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, palenoble (63) writes:
you contradict yourself. something that doesn't exist obviously cannot be full of feces. nevertheless I am sure you will change your attitude and/or opinion quite a few times whilst progressing(suggests positive evolution)in your life. Kafka wrote 'Two things I know for sure. There is no God and there must be one.' Nicely portrayed outrage of a betrayed one though. Well done :)


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
i erpeat, by god i mean the concept of god rather than the hypothetical being


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, evolve (2261) writes:
Just because you don't listen, doesn't mean someone isn't there.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
i listened and i never got a reply, i listened for years and never got anything, at all, ive given up, christianity/catholisism arent for me, i have a different system of beliefs, but im saying that ive been there so im not just unwilling to consider any of that, i wrote that when i was really angry about something.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, saturatedloneliness6 (16) writes:
i like how you did this. at first, i didn't catch on with the "god is a piece of shit" thing, but as i read the 2nd stanza, i noticed it. creative. i like it. as for the write as a whole, you can believe what you want, and frankly, this hits closer to home than people know. i choose not to talk about the fact that i am athiest, so i understand what you're saying.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, saturatedloneliness6 (16) writes:
"god is full of shit"..correction. my bad.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
thanx, this actually sounds like im completely against god, in all honesty i just think that those religions arent for me, i get really annoyed when my more religious friends try to convert me and heres the result lol


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, Bridge (325) writes:
jeez, then i guess that's bad news for me huh? cuz, i still believe.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:
Is he now?


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
yes, he is.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:
Hmm. guess he exist then


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
more the concept of god rather than the hypothetical being, he doesnt exist but the concept that he does is full of shit.


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:
Oh. I agree god is a concept. But I think its more complicated then a short write to be honest. Not that it's badly written tho


On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, chococat_122 (31) writes:
i agree, i just summarized it, its a lot more complex than that, it also has a lot to do with trying to explain to some of my friends that im not just closed minded and unwilling to even consider thet possibility, but that ive been there and its not for me.



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