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Stagnant.
My soul's flowing river has turned putrid and silent.
Manage only a ripple when I happen across a picture
Of your dimpled smile.

(One on the left, three on the right)

But it's just a reminder of a useless fight
Between what was, and what ain't
And is no longer worth a thousand (s)words
Pierced, poisoned, and driven into my spine
For what it's worth, it's lost it's worth
Her desperate whispers that used to dance circles are becoming faint:

     "Always Remember."
     "Always Together."
     "Always Forever."


But in her letter she was intent on letting me know
Just how much more her pain meant to her than me
And I'll never forget.


Fragment.
Shattered pieces of the mirror that contained me cut my feet with reasons hidden beneath my shadow.
And for one single moment
Just before my fist broke it
I could have sworn I saw her standing behind it
Shaking in regret.
Girl, I would have destroyed the moon to change the tides for you
But now I'm forced to drive away with rearview eyes and listen to the preacher's lies about how I'm going to be just fine
And you're going to rest in peace

This will never rest in me

And even though the voice is fading:

     "Always...Together..."
     "Always...Forever..."


I'll always remember

What you wrote me.

In your letter.



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On Thursday May 29th, 2008, After hours (571) writes:
I haven't commented on all your works but i've read them all, the thing is ...your ability to allow someone that knows - not what you've been through, but allow others to feel what you are going through is so personal and admirable that I wish not to encroach on your space, yet appreciate it from a far, allowing you the respect you've shown in sharing...absolute goose bump eye welling stuff....


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, saturatedloneliness6 (16) writes:
that was amazing. i dont even know how to describe how this made me feel. you are an awesome writer and this made me have a twinge on the bottom of my heart..i have been there and felt that. "girl, i would have destroyed the moon to change the tides for you but now i'm forced to drive away with rearview eyes and listen to the preacher's lies about how im going to be just fine and you're going to rest in peace" absolutely breath-taking!


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (428) writes:
Heartbreaking and breathtaking. Amazing write!


On Wednesday May 28th, 2008, emptyeye (38) writes:
Extremely touching work...great job!


On Wednesday May 28th, 2008, DowngradeBeauty (58) writes:
Wow.... "But now I'm forced to drive away with rearview eyes and listen to the preacher's lies about how I'm going to be just fine And you're going to rest in peace " Those lines seemed to stop my heart! I love this! Thank you for sharing.



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