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Apple of Your Eye?

if i am the apple of your eye
(such as you profess with pumpkin-faced sincerity)
then please explain
why your banana
is so attentive to the melons?

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On Wednesday November 5th, 2008, Tinuviel (65) writes:

Your poems tend to be short, but just as interesting as any lengthy ones I've read.

On Monday September 1st, 2008, After hours (619) writes:

gotta love a girl that can turn the 'fruit section' into a smorgasborg of the very best pieces..super tasty

On Thursday August 21st, 2008, Sketso (607) writes:

like a fruit salad, glad you tossed this one out to the masses. ;) Reminds me of those classic rock lyrics... "Really love your peaches, want to shake your tree!"

On Wednesday August 20th, 2008, Sharon Rose (660) writes:

ahhh..that was great

On Wednesday August 20th, 2008, fallen (276) writes:

I'm gonna have to say that melons are quite possibly nature's banana magnets....LOL! Funny stuff, keep it coming.

On Wednesday August 20th, 2008, sixsixnine (552) writes:

That is one hell of a way to put it. well done

On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, saintedmad (1148) writes:

i could seriously relate this to the garden of eden. .. but instead i'll just say, the apple doesnt fall far from the tree, or something benignly clever

On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, Amaryllis (148) writes:

This made me feel fruity.

On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (460) writes:

hahah. i love this. *fave*

On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, Please Press Reset (194) writes:

This forced a laugh outta me during a serious conversation. Thanks :)

On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, Bunny Moon (603) writes:

*giggles* nice lips.

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