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"The Big "O" in Poetry" by Lipstick Whore

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he didn't look like much
bookish, a bit nerdy
he'd rake his hands
through his hair
that always needed cutting
disheveling it endearingly
he didn't talk a lot
but when he did
he deserved full and undivided attention
with just a touch of Irish
smooth and buttery
words slid out of him
arranged in the most ingenious
and most exquisite arrangements
they had life
and passion
they were alive and flirted with me
teased and tickled my brain
synapses warm then start to spark
his ideals and passion thrust into my open mind
neurons blaze trails of desire
as i hang on his every word
lusting for more of his voice
if he talks just a bit longer
i'm going to cum poetry



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On Thursday June 12th, 2008, downstream (113) writes:
*made me smile* - I really like this - the heart stopping beauty in a man who can reveal his soul in magically formed words. Captivating :) ~Downstream~


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Sketso (541) writes:
zOMG!!1! I'll admit that I wasn't in a 'commenting disposition' until about the last third of the poem, but then I practically choked to death when that ending slammed into my head! It seems you've taken a common them and made it uncommonly scintillating! 2 kudos to you!


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Sketso (541) writes:
*theme


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (419) writes:
*speaks fluent typo* and thank you again


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Geisha (754) writes:
Really good ending


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Suicide Is Right (87) writes:
that is incredible I really like the last line that was a perfect ending Once again you have blown my mind ~Crow


On Thursday June 12th, 2008, Chunky (60) writes:
im not good with really big words. i need a dictionary.



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