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Invisible Women

when you fuck me
i can feel her between us
i bear the weight of both of you
the weight of your indiscretion

i know she is there
because you called me by her name
and didn't even notice

her breasts press against mine
rendering mine inconsequential
lost in the ampleness of hers

her hipbones dig into me
grinding me down
pushing me further from your eyes
as you thrust into her

when you explode
into her epicenter
i am caught in the fallout zone
and vaporize

we are both invisible women
she thinks i can't see her
and you look right through me
since you started fucking her

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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:

You no whore. You a lady with honest passion and precision with the poetic pen. Rock on, Lady :) -Carl

On Thursday May 15th, 2008, Marionette Mars (516) writes:

oh for the love of cheese. i love this write. i really have to upgrade. rawr. i want to favor this because it is so deep. so filled with emotion. i love this write. perfect. -mars

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, RubyXero (454) writes:

very interesting and unique.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Tinuviel (68) writes:

Beauty in such honesty.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Ainsof (1831) writes:

*inserts self into imagery* very nice and such a shame all at once, great climax at the end... a touch of the erotic with a trope that does 'reality' more justice than anything literal....

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (418) writes:

You comments are so often more poetic than the poetry...they always make me wish I could purr. I can't even begin to imagine the kind of sweet somethings you whisper in your lover's ears... Additionally-thank you for the new word to add to my collection.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Narcissa (681) writes:

Yeah he is great with the poetry in the comment box...gets me every time. This piece though physically raw I felt the emotional pull...quite painful. Excellent piece.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, After hours (567) writes:

Fuck me....you are a talent, the fav count has begun.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, elisa (2017) writes:

*piggybacks comment... mostly*

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