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"Tilt-a-World" by Lipstick Whore

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Have you ever wished you had the power
to tilt the world just enough
to alter the direction of a life?

Slight tip to the right and your best friend's
childhood encounter with the schoolyard bully
never had to be.

Slight tip to the left so
you missed that party
where you drank so much
you vomited up your dignity.

You get the picture.

And you, my friend
with your naive heart,
could i have saved you from the collision
with that bitch who stole your smile?

I saw it coming, that crash.

I was first on the scene and found you
broken, shattered, left for dead.

Two FUCKING years,
two long, tear stained years
we worked at putting you back together again.

There were times we both stopped
believing in the sun.

We finally found all the pieces
and constructed a reasonable facsimile
of the man you used to be.

A copy is never the same as an original
so i keep crazy glue in my purse
for emergency repairs
when your edges start to lift.

And every time i see you, i think
if i had been able to tip the world
just a little
you might have fallen into my arms
instead of the path of her destruction.




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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, carlosjackal (1714) writes:
=) -Carl


On Tuesday April 29th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (413) writes:
Thank you everyone for your thoughtful encouragement...it is appreciated!


On Tuesday April 29th, 2008, After hours (575) writes:
Really well written, and a vital indication to the sort of friend you are, great write.


On Monday April 28th, 2008, Ainsof (1838) writes:
Love the concept... maybe we could tilt-a-world to avoid my unfortunate encounter with a tilt-a-whirl at a carnival so many years ago? twas not good. Imagine how many tilts it would take to put humanity back together again... (if it ever were)


On Monday April 28th, 2008, Sketso (531) writes:
Amusing thought for the title, and well played write for the work, which shatters the amusement altogether. It almost inspires a "Tilt-a-World" response from me, nowhere near related, but the thought just sticks in my head... I shall have to think on it a bit longer.


On Monday April 28th, 2008, Sketso (531) writes:
Might I add, my favorite work of yours thus far, with the title and the personal touch all wrapped into one, it's one that touched me.


On Monday April 28th, 2008, Mab (985) writes:
your writing draws me right in...I can only echo T/S.


On Monday April 28th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (750) writes:
Nice! Like the title and the sentiments. Ciao, T/S



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