DarkPoetry -|- Insatiable -|- Abyss

Abyss

She's racing.
With every twist and
Every turn
She becomes more lost.
The walls begin to rise.
Frantic she becomes.
A way out is what she's looking for
Although she won't find it.
She is helplessly lost
In her own mind.
Racing and running
In a maze that is
Her own twisted abyss.

Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.

Comments on Abyss

If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Friday April 11th, 2008, carlosjackal (1699) writes:

Dig this..Welcome To DP, Lady. -Carl

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

Desperate. The Mabstress beat me to it. Welcome.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Ms Mooncake (566) writes:

oh thats scary. i was just thinking about my own crazyness. i loves this, its so relistic w/ a twist of just, og idk, greatness. ^_^ welcome to dp

On Thursday April 10th, 2008, tangeled (507) writes:

welcome to dp. this is a great write to start with. our minds can be quite complex and its easy to be stuck in them as we all live in our own minds. scary at times it can be though, for some. i feel i can relate to this almost too much, very nice write. welcome again. ~ta~

On Thursday April 10th, 2008, Strabo (47) writes:

nice

On Thursday April 10th, 2008, Mab (999) writes:

desperation laced with psychosis makes it that much more frightening...like Alice tumbling down the rabbit hole with her eyes closed.

Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read Home Copyright Policy Bugs

Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC

© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.

Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/17479/108446 on Tuesday October 07th, 2008 08:08 PM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)