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I’m Addicted to Death

I’ve always been told,
“Leaves of three, let them be,”
Your lips drip poison
They just scream to me
So I play make believe
One last kiss to realize our shattered bliss.
Heaven will drip
Tears of joy when my skull splits.
As the fluids flow,
My back is covered with shadows,
Turn me over
Take a glance, leave a stare
I say nothing,
Just shooting your own reflection back.
Crisp, hollow dark brown eyes,
Feel me, inhale, exhale then release a sigh.

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On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, Nixx (170) writes:

i feel this. thank you and welcome to DP :D

On Friday April 11th, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

thanks. glad to be here at dp. =D

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, Marionette Mars (511) writes:

i'm addicted to perfection. and cutting. life sucks doesn't it?-mars

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

yeah it does. haha. i'm not addicted to much though. not anymore at least. aha.

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, BeforeIGiveUpMoon (570) writes:

this is wicked shit! i loves it!

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

Thanks! I appreciate the bookmarking as well. ;] makes me feel like i've accomplished something.

On Wednesday April 2nd, 2008, BeforeIGiveUpMoon (570) writes:

lol, you have. ^_^

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Narcissa (682) writes:

You got me on that last line....but the whole piece was great :)

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

thank you! I really enjoyed the last line, I was actually a little confused on whether that should end it or not, but I was happy with the piece there. =]

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Bridge (340) writes:

this IS REALLY good. they're right, tons of imagery in such a few lines.

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

Thank you. ;] I'm glad you are taking so much from it. =]

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:

Dig this. Excellent images created with wonderful, twisting language. Write the hell on! -Carl

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

Thanks! Your comments are greatly appreciated. =]

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:

Muchas gracias for posting!

On Monday March 31st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

I've read it a bunch of times.. great great write

On Monday March 31st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

Really? Well I'm glad that you enjoy it. =] Hopefully I'll be able to send some money off soon for my membership so I can stick around for awhile. ;] hah.

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

Just sedn him a postcard. easy and sweet

On Monday March 31st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

wow, this made my mind spin. Could be awsome lyrics. Great write

On Monday March 31st, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

thanks! i wrote this for the finding emo contest. =p It wasn't as hard as I thought it might have been (having to include certain words and such).

On Monday March 31st, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:

Fitting. The ending perfectly fitting. Good luck on the contest

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