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I’m Not Superman

Wow, I can’t believe that
Tonight I cried over you.
You are so beautiful
In everyway,
And know that my pen
Only writes words
That are true.
It blows my mind,
Even now I can’t believe
That I love you so much
And nothing I do
Can make you love me
Like I love you.
I’ve tried the sweetest things,
But in the end they are trash
That I add to my endless,
Paper stash,
Of broken thoughts,
Wasted confessions,
And pointless tales of drunken seduction.
Just know that on this night,
3-25 2:34am that I,
I cried over you.

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On Sunday March 30th, 2008, PaYaSiN (56) writes:

=D The title sucks I agree, but the reasoning behind it in my opinion is a lil funny. I'll just copy & paste my reasoning for the title... "Yeah. The title is kinda lame, but you probably perceive it much differently than I did when I chose that for the title… I thought it was kinda funny. Like in some stupid comedy movies, when the women want sex like 3 times in one day and the guy is like “I’m not superman.” That’s where it comes from, except instead of sex, I wrote three poems in one night." Funny eh?

On Sunday March 30th, 2008, Alanarchy (1693) writes:

I really dug this. It's simple, easy to relate to. And spoken well. My only issue is the title, it CAN fit, but not as well as something ELSE could. But whateva. The title isn't important, the meat is, and this was great. Write on.

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