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With gin-laced breath I breathe
In the scent of your uninhibited lust
The most beautiful woman I have ever seen
Laying naked before me
My hands move over your soft breasts
Watching you close your eyes
As I give your beautiful, pink nipples a soft pinch
Taking one into my mouth and sucking very softly
"More"
I look down at your beautiful pussy
Shaved and pink
With the perfect little clit
The tip of my tongue circles your most sweet button
Savoring your sweet juices
My fingers penetrate your toght hole
In and out I move them
As I continue to lick your sweet pussy
My other hand playing with my own clit
Bringing myself closer to the sweet climax
As you writhe with pleasure
Your legs wrapped around my head
Oh, baby, you want to feel good?
I bring wour perfect, sweet clit into my mouth
And continue to prod it with my tongue
I rub my own a bit quicker
Oh, yeah
My finger presses on the soft spot
Inside of your tight, beautiful pussy
Your juices begin to flow
You experience climax at the hands of a woman
The first woman you have ever been with
Knowing that
My own juices run from my pussy
I lay my head between your sexy breasts
Listeneing to your heart-beat coming down
Wanting you to give me the same pleasure I gave you



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On Saturday March 29th, 2008, The Fool (1048) writes:
Hmm, I don't like the constant mention of the pussy.. But, it has its own and its how you wrote it, you need to check the grammar a bit ;) "Listening" "tight" and err.. I think thats about it.. Check it over :D Good job ~ Fool


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, Fallen Moon (552) writes:
O_o lucky girl, damn. see, i wish my girl woulda did this, i should so send this to her, lol


On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, elisa (1985) writes:
more..... 'nuff said.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Geisha (813) writes:
This was awesome! *clicks button* *Welcome to DP...-Geisha


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (628) writes:
kick ass write, :D this definatly made my day, keep this coming -symph-


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Blood_Wing (15) writes:
I really liked this. It was...FUN. (^_^)


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Guillotine (232) writes:
Welcome to DP (And to Monkey). Ban him from your comments. Oh wait, you can't! Well, he'll enjoy your writes just as much as I will. Haha, seeya round.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
So much action and all she had to say was more.. awsome :D


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Mab (1096) writes:
mmm...very sexy.this made me want to touch myself ;)


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
DO IT!


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Alanarchy (1611) writes:
A very good write. Eroticas are always a good way to kick of a darkpoet's career, and I enjoyed. My only criticism is this: Becareful to overuse your adjectives like "Soft" and "Sweet". Sometimes a poet can get carried away by trying to be too poetic, if that's even possible. Otherwise this was nice. Write on and welcome.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
Good write. And I have no idea if it does, But this should have age restrictions on it :) before you get to many comments


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Inevitability (645) writes:
no, no age restrictions, because I could read it without being logged in. it does need the little 18 up check box marked, just for the sake of saving the site admin a parental complaint for who knows who...


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
And wellcome to DP



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