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Sorrow in a Bleeding heart.

You put a smile on my face
When i'm alone
In this dark place
Which we call home

You are my fire
Keeping me safe and warm
You are my warning
Of the storms that are passing through this world

As you stand here with me
I fall to my knees and weep

Without you sorrow fills my body, as my heart Bleeds.
I can't wait here any longer, my life must go on.
There is only one question or demand left to ponder on.

Do you love me... because my heart is Bleeding..

Sorrow in a Bleeding heart
as im watching my life fall apart
with all this sorrow and all this pain
I can feel, running though my vains

Without you sorrow fills my body, as my heart Bleeds.
I can't wait here any longer, my life must go on.
There is only one question or demand left to ponder on.

Do you love me.. Because my heart is
Bleeding..

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On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Dark Wing (64) writes:

I like the way the words flow together while I was reading this. Very well done

On Thursday April 3rd, 2008, batman nipples (2246) writes:

"You are my warning/Of the storms that are passing through this world" I adore those lines. So heartfelt. Genuine write, and that always makes for the best poems, or in this case, lyrics, in my opinion. Just let your heart spill out onto the page. Well done.

On Wednesday April 2nd, 2008, brokenbandagedbetter (22) writes:

Very nice my love...let it pour out Beth, if you dont, it will surely eat you up from the inside out! Damn I am proud of you sweet girl!!! See you at home :)

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, MindRape (863) writes:

or do they love you BECAUSE your heart is bleeding? or do they love just your bleeding heart? mayhaps they love you and you hope they'll heal that bleeding heart??hmm?? don't do this to yourself....

On Thursday April 3rd, 2008, BethanyBallet (26) writes:

These are some lyrics a friend of mine wrote to a guy that was always there for her.. they are not complete. Though I shall finish them soon. :]

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, MindRape (863) writes:

love the personal feelings used to create this. I always admire shamelessness.....but the ending gives it a strangulated feeling as though this poem was choked dead mid thought...

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:

oh ive been there >_

On Thursday April 3rd, 2008, BethanyBallet (26) writes:

Yea.,. these are just llyrics.. but i do feel this way often.. i think that im in love with this boy.. but i can't be for sure. >_

On Friday April 4th, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:

its official. any guy who does this, makes you feel like a fuckin idiot, they suck. no matter how awesome they are they suck. lol

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